Brajesh Kumar's personal file is pristine - no thumbmarks, no blotches, no yellowing pages. There wasn't time. Within weeks of his joining a private engineering college in upscale Greater Noida, the 22-year-old had committed suicide, leaving a note saying that he could not cope with courses taught in English. An engineering diploma-holder from Jaunpur in UP, Brajesh cleared an all-UP competitive exam to get into the second year of a degree course at the Noida college. In his slim personal file, there were pictures of an intense-looking young man, forms filled in a neat, careful English handwriting, copies of school and college certificates that showed that while Brajesh had studied English as a subject until Class 10, the rest of his education, including his diploma, was in Hindi. He had also taken the competitive exam in Hindi. As a second-year student, he had no access to the Noida college's English skills programme, provided only to first-year students, and could not afford private coaching.
The English-excluded: The grieving family of Brajesh, who committed suicide as he couldn't cope with courses in English
Student who scored 100 in CBSE Class 12
English exam in e-mail to Outlook:
"It all depends on how one pen down the ideas....
The flow in the language helped me fetched marks."
Press release from a PR agency --
"I will be happy if you met Ray, his painting and his
thought. I have send you the invite prior."
Some of the celebratory writing on English doesn't communicate how sharp those boundaries can be. In a piece hailing the coming-of-age of Inglish (English mixed with 'Indian') as both the "aspirational language of the lower and middle classes and the fashionable language of drawing rooms", columnist Gurcharan Das wrote: "One of the cheerful things happening in India is the quiet democratisation of English." Quoting language expert David Crystal ("If 100 million Indians pronounce an English word in a certain way, this is more than Britain's population - so it's the only way to pronounce it"), Das also speculated: Is Inglish our conquest of English?
Das's observations do capture a truth - we hear it all around us - but it's only a partial one. There are many worlds of English in India, and not all are blithely democratic. In the intensely desired world of BPOs, IT majors and MNCs, language gatekeepers are turning down all but a minuscule number of applying graduates. According to Uma K. Raman, head, Skills Enhancement, HCL BPO, her company rejects 92-93 per cent of applicants for poor English. Sandhya Chitale, director, Nasscom's Educational Initiative, puts the rejection rate for non-engineering graduates applying to the IT and IT-enabled sector, both in "voice" and "non-voice" roles, at 82-83 per cent, for lack of soft skills, including written and oral English. About 65-75 per cent of applying engineers are rejected for the same reasons.
Teaching exercise in a magazine brought out by a
popular English teaching institute--
Incorrect sentence : "Oh, he has the same car with yours?"
Correct sentence: "Oh, he has the same car like yours?"
Incorrect sentence : "Let me check your pic again see
how is your beautiful eyes looks like. Ahha"
Correct sentence: "Let me take a look at your pic again
and see how beautiful your eyes look like. Haha"
You know what I mean: Spellings run amok across the country. Democratisation of English?
"The curricula only emphasise reading and writing, not listening and speaking. You can't get a sentence out of a student who is asked to talk about himself," says Chitale bluntly. Raman declares written English even worse than spoken. "There is a myth that Indians are good at grammar," he says, "but they are only good at learning concepts - what is a noun, what is an adjective - not at applying them."
Tip from English teacher to Class 12 students --
"Keep the language simple and yet so crispy...
do not get deviate from topic."
In the Humanities section of one of the country's IITs, where English teaching is taken more seriously than in most engineering colleges, I hear the same conversation from a different perspective. Many new entrants to IITs struggle, teachers say, in communication classes. The demand for remedial English has grown, supply cannot keep pace. The expectation of students that English can be "learnt in a single day" to measure up to the global marketplace does not help. Many students have difficulty organising and expressing their thoughts in a coherent language structure. Ninety per cent of his students, says one teacher, would find it hard to describe a simple concept like evaporation in a couple of logically linked sentences. "They can give you points, but can't connect them," he said. The teachers make an important fundamental point, which I hear repeated, time and again, by teachers in other institutions. These problems have their roots in students being language-impoverished rather than just English-impoverished (that is, demonstrating a poor ability in regional languages too), and being virtually cut off from the humanities stream from senior school.
English writing abilities of school students
is poor, even in the country's top schools.
A 2006 survey (conducted jointly by
Wipro Applying Thought in Schools and
the organisation Educational Initiatives) among
Class 4-8 students in 134 top English medium schools
in the five metros found that 80 per cent of students
even in Class 8 make mistakes in
comprehension, grammar and syntax.
A smiling, red-lipsticked blonde woman painted on a board that lights up at night beckons some of these consumers to a "premium institution for spoken and advanced English" in a south Delhi colony. Sitting in on an 'exclusive' teaching session conducted by one of the thousands of MAs in English who have descended on the English teaching scene, I can see this is a power relationship. The teacher is omniscient, even if she says "Gayatri is going to expose more to foreign buyers" while explaining why her student, who works in an export unit, needs to improve her English. The students, Gayatri and Anish - a young contractor who supplies marble and needs better English to work on a big Indian construction company's project in Singapore - are eager but diffident. They pay around Rs 2,500 a month for lessons. A dubious-looking Hindi-English guide is being used. Course materials lying around the "premium institution" turn out to be stuff the proprietor "burnt nights", as he puts it, printing off the Net. What he's got together is truly nightmarish: a mish-mash of definitions of auxiliary verbs, hackneyed proverbs (man proposes, god disposes), American "slangs" and "jargons" (airhead, hunk, chocoholic), tongue-twisters, teaching exercises that seem to have been written for Chinese students, with references to common Chinese errors. American English is the place's forte, I am told, and a class could begin, says one teacher, by her walking in and saying, "Hi dudes and dudettes".
Teacher knows all: Or does she?
That's the home-made English academy, at the opposite end of the market from the superior language courses sold by the British Council for around Rs 9,000 per two-month term of instruction, and there are different shades in between. The clamour to sell English to millions of eager India buyers - individuals, corporate houses, state governments - is growing. While "academies" are advancing into tehsil towns and pockmarking hill stations with their boards, UK language schools are eyeing the Indian market.
Rejected For Poor English: 82-83 per cent
of non-engineering graduates applying to
the IT and IT-enabled sector and 65-75 per cent
of applying engineers are rejected for lacking
soft skills, including written and oral English fluency.
-- Sandhya Chitale, director of Nasscom's Educational Initiative
What the experts seem to be saying is that you have to grow it, with some dedication, through the education system. Parents across the country, desperate to advance their children's futures in a world of English, know that. By campaigning hard or voting with their feet (transferring their kids from government schools to English medium schools), they have forced changes in well- entrenched political and academic positions and dragged a timorous state to the brink of a new experiment.
Application for a job in an NGO:
"With profound veneration, I implore to
ejaculate before you the following
few lines for favour of your kind consideration.
I am MA and having 12 years experience
in concerning field."
Hum bhi English: Hopefuls outside a Patna English teaching shop
Interestingly, problems with the way English is taught and learnt are found to occur across the system. A 2006 survey conducted jointly by Wipro Applying Thought in Schools and Educational Initiatives among 32,000 students across 142 top English medium schools in the five metros showed that about 80 per cent of students even in Class 8 made mistakes in comprehension, grammar and syntax.
Written response to a question on
Freedom of Thought by a PhD Student in an
English communication class at an IIT --
"Although the freedom of thought is most
- important but it is not or easy as it sound...
When express different opinion. If we refused -
to other people to hold there opinion on
religion or politics. The process is impossible."
Thank you to all those who have taken the trouble to read the article and share their thoughts. Out of the arguments made here, there are two that perhaps need answering. So here they go.
1. The first part of the article compares outcomes (relative percentages of population of the religions concerned) irrespective of the process that led to those outcomes - whether immigration, relatively faster population growth or conversions. This was for two reasons. One, to put the figure of 2.3 per cent in "numerical perspective", as the article itself explained. The second reason was that outcomes are ultimately what the crux of debate is about. The rest of the article in any case dealt with process - or conversions in this case, from both a contemporary and historical perspective.
2. Some commenters have tried to cast doubts on the reliability of Census 2001. Those who do this should bear in mind that Census 2001 was conducted by a BJP government. Considering the extreme importance that BJP gives to this issue, it would be reasonable to expect that IF it had perceived a problem with the methodology that was distorting the numbers, it would have fixed it. As the article mentioned, BJP or BJP-supported governments have been in power for 10 of the last 40 years, or about a quarter of the time, and the only reasonable conclusion one can arrive at is that any misreporting of numbers, real or perceived, would be marginal and hence, not of importance.
To all other arguments made, my answer is the following: Please read the article again, with particular focus on the quotations of Vivekananda and Monier Williams, and the history of the missionary efforts in Bengal and their outcome.
@ 51 Anwaar sir
Thanks for the link. Very informative.
But it was never a curse.
BTW, my comment was in response to Anwaar's posting of Aathish Taseer.
The issue is not English language per-se. It is that our near perfect heirarchical culture (as some call it casteist though I think heirarchical is more accurate) always keeps creating new heirarchies or modifying old ones. So for now "english" is high (and so of course desired) in the "new" heirarchy.
I am one of those who agrees that India's tragedy is it's elite (while who is elite changes from the Brahmins of yore to now - their attitudes/treatment/disdain/incestous-hoarding for the rest doesn't change much, including when someone from the non-elite join the new elite they adopt all the pits and falls of the elite). So today is the English speaking Elite but then the rest want to join it too - but natural - who are we to complain!!!
Anyways, I did like the Author's ENGLISH book - The Way Things Where. In many parts I could relate to it very personally and find myself and people around me in the various kirdaars in the book.
How English Ruined Indian Literature
By AATISH TASEER
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